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Controlled Love, Part 5: Feeling

Title: Feeling
Series: Controlled Love, Part 5. Start the series here.
Fandom: A Bit of Fry & Laurie
Pairing: Tony/Control
Rating: We got some smexing goin' on...R, I guess.
Summary: Tony experiences some wonderful sensations.
Disclaimer: No ownership claimed, just oodles of love for these characters.

Feeling

Tony reveled in the assault on his senses. Control's scent filled his nostrils; the taste of Control's coffee-flavoured kisses lingered in his mouth. His ragged breathing had dried his lips; he luxuriated in feeling his tongue languidly moistening them. The air cooled the saliva left from Control's attack on his hard sensitive nipples.

Looking down, he saw his cock engulfed in Control's beautiful mouth. He gloried in the moans and wet slurping noises that filled the room. His hands entwined in dark silky hair, pulling Control's head closer.

It ended in blissful, shuddering ecstasy.

In his sleep, Tony smiled softly.

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kalimyre
Feb. 23rd, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
Ah, Tony. I can just picturing him remembering the dream next time he sees Control and being all flustered. *g*
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:43 pm (UTC)
Yes. I definitely like that and will work that in. Any more little bunnies? Send 'em hopping over!
kalimyre
Feb. 23rd, 2007 08:41 pm (UTC)
Yay! And for further bunnies... hmm. What if, at some formal work related function, he sees Control (looking fantastically edible in a tux, of course) with some gorgeous woman he assumes is Mrs. Control? She isn't, of course, she's some visiting dignitary or something, but Tony sees Control speaking politely with her and is all jealous and excluded and generally not happy. Angst ensues. *g*
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 11:39 pm (UTC)
Oooh, I like that! Could be an undercover adventure, maybe. Maybe they have to go to the opera...but a formal dinner would work better, right? Opera would mean dark theater, harder for Tony see all that politeness.

I shall put this into the grinder and see what comes out! Thanks, love. *mwah!*
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 11:42 pm (UTC)
Hey...I just realized...you used a sleeping Tony Bertie icon! Gold star for appropriate icon usage! *stick*

Seriously, that's exactly the smile I pictured on Tony's face for that last night. So perfect. :)
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 11:43 pm (UTC)
"Last night"? Cripes...I meant "last line"! I need a nap.
kalimyre
Feb. 24th, 2007 02:30 am (UTC)
Hee! HL does do adorable little smiles, doesn't he?
ennui_blue_lite
Feb. 23rd, 2007 02:24 pm (UTC)
I second kalimyre. Tony has to recall the happy dream when he sees Control again. Much love for this. So hot.
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:44 pm (UTC)
Yessss...excellent idea and that will definitely be an upcoming installment. Yay! I'm so glad you like it!

What do you think of "Controlled Love" as the title for the series? :)
derien
Feb. 23rd, 2007 02:36 pm (UTC)
But at first he only remembers the coffee part of the dream, and blurts out "I had a dream about you, Control!" And as Control is saying, "Oh, what did you dream?" the rest comes flooding back, and he gets VERY flustered.

(Can you tell I've had that happen to me? Only I'm not as earnest as Tony, I think I covered up better than he would. ;))
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:45 pm (UTC)
Heh heh...nice! That could really work well! Thanks for the suggestion. *hug*

Ha! I have a feeling Tony would turn a few shades of red over that.
skyblue_reverie
Feb. 23rd, 2007 04:22 pm (UTC)
sl;dkfadlijefa;lksdjf

let me try again.

nnnnggggghhh.

sorry, my words have left me. except this one: HAWWWWTTTTT.
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:47 pm (UTC)
Yay! I've left you speechless! :)

That's only fair...you've done it to me enough times with your fic. ("how does that feel...sir" indeed!) *eg*
skyblue_reverie
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:06 am (UTC)
Hee, thanks. I endeavour to give satisfaction. ;)

And, OMG, I've had T/C moans and slurping noises running through my head all day. Nice, but distracting! :p
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:42 am (UTC)
Yes. I've been very, um, satisfied reading your fic. *cough*

Bwuahahahaha for day-long T/C moaning and slurping! It's amazing what senses the written word can evoke, isn't it?

*stares at Stephen's tonguing and iz ded*
jabber_moose
Feb. 23rd, 2007 05:12 pm (UTC)
Sweet and lovely and oh so Tony. Coffee flavored kisses...that made me go aww.

Hot in a way that only T and C could pull off.
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:48 pm (UTC)
The flavored kisses was a last-minute add. I thought it worked well and would be exactly what would make a sensory impression on Tony. Of course, it was Tony's coffee!

Yay! for hot T/C!
zekkass
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:10 pm (UTC)
fdssgsdg.

*promptly memorizes so I can dream about it*

^_^
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:49 pm (UTC)
LOL! Enjoy your dream, love. I know I did. XD
clairefry
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:39 pm (UTC)
Oooooooooh! :-) *loves* *hugs* Fab! :D :D :D :D :D
msliz4857
Feb. 23rd, 2007 06:49 pm (UTC)
Yay! So glad you're enjoying! :D
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
Oh I am, I am! I love this pair (almost as much as Jeeves and Bertie) and reading about them is fabulous. Tony seems so polite and lovely, but I bet he'd be a whore in bed... well let loose in bed with Control anyway ;-)
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 01:42 am (UTC)
Heh. That's exactly how I see him. Still waters run deep and all, what? ;)
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 01:51 am (UTC)
Oh yes... very much so. They are both the same, they come across as your everyday MI6 chaps, ever so polite, trustworthy and sweet, but get them together and add one bed, some condoms (safe sex darling, we want our boys safe) and liberal amounts of lubricant... Oh dear Lord... *faints*
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 01:54 am (UTC)
A bed, some rope, maybe a makeshift gag...

I checked my mind, and it was boggled. ;)
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 02:03 am (UTC)
Rope... gag... oh my gosh! Go boys go!

My mind is completely boggled too! And I do wish you hadn't used that pic... even though I am Stephen's girl at heart, there is somthing about that man that makes me crazy! ;-)
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 02:15 am (UTC)
Heh. Hugh is a hottie, no two ways about it. He was cute as a young man, but he's aged stunningly.

And glasses? Teh lurve. *slurp!*

Here are a few of my favorite pix of one of the primary objets de mon amour. (Clicky for larger picture.)

hughlaurie405.jpg    Mail4_Hugh2.jpg    OUT17767773.jpg
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 02:20 am (UTC)
Uhhh... *points* errrr... oh dear God... ummmmmm... I... well... umm.. thanks awfully for those... er... yes, I think I need to go for a lie down... *shakes head* Being surrounded by pics of Stephen in my bedroom doesn't help! ;-)

xxxx
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:07 am (UTC)
Has recovered... yup ta muchly for the pics! They will go very will with the Stephen pics on my wall! :D

msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:43 am (UTC)
Put them close together...you know they want it. Heh.
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:47 am (UTC)
Oh yes they do indeed... I knew this was a bad idea... I've had to avert my eyes and in my own bedroom too! Thank goodness for the internet!!! *Now now boys... oh dear... oh... yes well...* This is your fault!x ;-)

xxx
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 03:53 am (UTC)
Why in heaven's name would you not look? The fandom needs a detailed report, woman!

Heh. I love the thought of them sexing each other up. *goes off to a very happy place*
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 04:10 am (UTC)
Well... I risked a look... Oh dear God I have never seen shirts being disposed off as quickly as that... lips, jawlines, necks, chests, nipples, down, down, tongues exploring... navels... down, down... Oh my Gooood... *pats brow* Trousers thrown across the rooom... underwear... Oh God... No underwear... Uhmmm... Well... WEll.. WELL... Certainly all that... hmmm... oh... oh Lord... Stephen... be careful with him... Oh he likes it... okay... Well... WELL... Oh Good Lord... Well if it doesn't fit, use your hands - you should know that by now... Dear Lord, Oh my - people would pay money to hear Hugh in that sort of state - I've never heard such sweet-sounding profanities... WELL... Oh.. Oh... um would you like some tissues to clean that up... no, you'll lick it... alright them... umm... oh... oh dear me... lube, it's under the pillow - here, take it... oh um... should I go? No? Oh good, my friends shall be so pleased... wow... um does that hurt? Oh really... well... oh dear Lord... shall I sit on the floor and allow you full use of the bed? Good good... Oh My God... Grip his shoulders or bite one of them... Believe me it works... No - by all means scream... Goodness... Well... yes deep breaths dear... God you two are sexy when you kiss... yes you can have the duvet... don't you want to clean up first? Oh, no that's fine... Er shall I dispose of that for you? No, no I don't mind... No, no I've had a great time! Live Journal?! No, never heard of it... Tell anyone?? Good Lord no, woudln't dream of it! Will you excuse me - I have to um... say hello to a friend... Yes... Take your time!

Hehehehehehehe

:D:D:D
msliz4857
Feb. 24th, 2007 04:25 am (UTC)
Mmmmm...Stephen would definitely be a biter, don't you think?

OMG, they certainly were busy boys weren't they? I'm sure they truly appreciated the use of your, um, facilities, and your discretion at keeping everything to yourself. What happens at Claire's, stays at Claire's, eh? Very nice.

And, yes, they would be totally sexy kissing. I can so totally picture it.

*iz ded*
clairefry
Feb. 24th, 2007 04:36 am (UTC)
*revives quickly*

Oh yes, he certainly is a biter... God Lord... ;-)

Busy? Hardly gives it justice! :-) But you know, glad to allow them the use of my room, can't be seen to keep them apart!

Of course I'd never dream of telling anyone what happened, whatever they get up to here is none of anyone else's business! This reply does not exsist!

Same time next week boys?... oh yes of course! Anytime, anytime!

No I told you, I've never heard of LiveJournal... what are you on about? Concentrate on Hugh, much more interesting!

The kissing would be amazingly sexy! So much so they would never dream of doing it in public as they are aware of the effect they would have on the fangirls... er public... damn them!

Though I can picture it too!

Yes can you keep it quiet darlings... my parents are asleep!
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